My extraordinary little brother

My brother is a special person in my life because nobody in the world knows me, accepts me and supports me like he does. He is very good-looking. He is short like me but he looks taller because he is thin. He is fifteen years old but he seems a little bit younger. He has big, round, brown eyes and although it is very common in this country to have the eyes of this color, for me his eyes are like windows towards his beautiful soul. He has short, straight, dark brown hair that combines perfectly with his olive skin.

He is my younger brother but sometimes I feel like he is older than me because he is very mature. Even though he is a teenager, he doesn't act like one because he is not interested in parties or girlfriends like most of the teenagers. He prefers to spend his time reading a book or watching a movie. He is very creative and imaginative. Sometimes when I arrive at home from the university, he is waiting for me with some story that he wrote in his free time at school and I really enjoy listening to him. I admire him a lot because he is an open-minded person. He accepts people without judging them. He doesn't really mind whether a person is black, fat, gay or Jewish because the only important thing for him it is if that person has good feelings. And because of that and much more I love my brother more than anyone in this world.

Reflection:

This was my second paragraph and I think it came out pretty good. At the beginning It was difficult to me to organize the ideas but then everything flowed nicely. I had fewer problems in terms of vocabulary and punctuation than before, since I knew certain rules. I learned that when we write a descriptive paragraph ,we must put attention to the details  because that way it is more attractive for the person who is going to read it. I really enjoyed  writing this paragraph.