Oktapodi: A love story

The next story is a beautiful love story about two octopuses in love. Jimmy and Sarah were a couple that lived happily in a fishtank. They loved to spend time together, hugging each other, and looking at their eyes. The only problem with their fairytale story was that they lived in a fishstore, so they were always afraid of that someone someday went to buy one of them. And one day the inevitable happened.

It was a beautiful sunny day in the fishstore. Sarah and Jimmy were hugging each other when suddenly the evil knocked at their door. A tall and thin man entered to the store and talked to the salesman. He wanted to buy one of them and he did it. The salesman put on a yellow glove on his hand and took out Sarah. Jimmy saw how the man was taking away the love of his life and carrying her directly to death. He jumped out of the fishtank and rushed to save her. The man drove fast but the love for her was stronger, so he reached the car and fought for her. The man was determined to take her with him, but Jimmy was not willing to let her go easily. She pulled the lever and the man lost control of the vehicle. Sarah and Jimmy were ejected from the car and left on the sidewalk. The man didn't give up and went after them, and they jumped from pool to pool to save themselves. Unfortunately the man caught them but they defended themselves by throwing ink to him. They grabbed themselves to a clothes line and stayed there, while the man and the car ended up right to the sea.

Finally when they thought it was all over, a seagul appeared and took away Jimmy, but this time was she who without hesitation went to rescue him.

Reflection:

I loved writing this paragraph because I loved the video. I think that narrative texts are my favorites. I love the idea of telling stories, I like to give details and  make the reader feel that he or she is part of the history. With this paragraph I reinforced very much the punctuation, connectors and grammar.